Can someone look over this, please?

[Kfamr]

I'm making the set-up sheet for my mom's work. I just wanted to make sure there's no typos before printing it out. It's always a lot easier for someone to find your porblems than you doing it yourself. :p
http://www.petevents.com/~simba/chick.jpg

Thanks in advance.

[carole]

Hey Kay looks mighty fine to me, but hey what would I know we spell differently from you guys anyhow lol, but I could not find any mistakes.

[lizbud]

Looks fine to me also. Good job.:)

[Cataholic]

Kay, I would consider making the 'e' in everybody lower case. It isn't the beginning of a sentance. That is the ONLY thing I saw..and it is not a big deal at all, but, might be gramatically incorrect.

[KYS]

Good job! :D

[jennifert9]

Kay, it looks great! But why not make each sentence in the beginning on a separate line...like this:

WE ARE A TEAM!
Everybody and .....etc.
That would have more PUNCH, you know....:)

[Jods]

Looks great!!

[Tubby & Peanut's Mom]

Does Reg.3 have a secondary task? Just curious because all the others do. Buns and Machines also don't have any secondary tasks listed, but I have no idea if they should have something listed or not. Other than that - looks great! :)

[green_chameleon_girl]

Looks great to me Kay!:)

[Kfamr]

Thanks for all of the replies guys (I really appreciate it) but I was mainly looking for typos. My mom had written exactly what she wanted out and cleared it with her boss (what the paper says), So I'm not supposed to change anything, I was just supposed to create it and organize it similar to the old set-up sheet.

[sammy101]

looks good!:)

[Blustang24]

In answer to your question Tubby & peanuts- register 3 is never used. it's up against a wall and that peticular store isn't busy enough to use it USUALLY, but besides that they use it as a cash change drawer. :) Good thinking though.


The spreadsheet looks great KayAnn

[slleipnir]

Chick-fill-ah or chick-fill-eh

?

[momcat]

Hi! Part of my job is to review outgoing correspondence. This looks fine!