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Amber
11-29-2003, 08:31 PM
Please tell me whatyou think. ;)

::PLEASE::

Please dont turn your back at me,
For Im just a shelter dog.

I sit here in this lonely place,
As I always pray to God.

I pray that I will someday have a place to call my own,
Where I can play and be safe, and just chew on my big bone.

But today I'm just a shelter dog,
Dont turn your back at me.

I sit in this lonley place,
Just waiting for my family.

By,
(Me) Amber Owsley

Amber
11-29-2003, 09:51 PM
bumpies :)

PapillonCrazie!
11-29-2003, 09:55 PM
Awww it's wonderful! :)

*FlatCoatsRule*
11-29-2003, 10:35 PM
It's, it's, i don't know, it's good! it's great! I can't find the word for it. lol, you should enter that in a contest or something

bluekat
11-30-2003, 10:28 AM
Nice poem!:)

Dogz
11-30-2003, 10:40 AM
It's really good:)

primabella
11-30-2003, 10:46 AM
I liked it! :)

Amber
11-30-2003, 12:11 PM
Thanks!