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GoldenRetrLuver
10-12-2003, 08:45 PM
I got in the mood of writing a poem. I was thinking about Molly and Daisy the other day while I was at school, (like always :p) and it dawned on me that Daisy will be turning 2 and Molly will be turning 3 in a few months! :( My how time flys...I wrote this poem, just for the occasin. It's a little sappy. :o

The day you walked into my life,
You became very special to me,
It's like all time had stopped for us,
I had forgotten how to breathe.

You were such a playful puppy,
As happy as can be,
I just knew right from the start,
How precious you would be to me.

You comforted me through sad times,
Just like a friend would do,
Everynight I would thank God,
For bringing me to you.

Years go by but that doesn't change a thing,
It just makes my love for you grow stronger,
And appreciate what life brings.

It's true your getting older,
But things will stay the same,
In my heart there is a place for you,
That will never break nor fade.


:)

Aspen and Misty
10-12-2003, 08:52 PM
O I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! That was soooooo good!

Ash

Foam
10-12-2003, 08:55 PM
Beautiful. :) That's really sweet.

GoldenRetrLuver
10-14-2003, 10:09 PM
Thanks guys. :)

bluekat
10-15-2003, 05:16 PM
Aww, that's such a nice poem!:)

popcornbird
10-15-2003, 05:32 PM
You have great talent! Love it! :D

10-16-2003, 04:21 PM
That was a touching poem about your baby's. It was well done and obviously very heartfelt. I would love to see more.
I write poetry myself, and you have give me inspiration to write about my Shihtzu baby, April. :)

Dogz
10-16-2003, 09:06 PM
Good job, that is a great poem.:)